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General Discussion / Re: Don't Hug Me, I'm Scared
« on: 01:19:43 AM 09/12/14 »
Reminds of me The Cloning, the episode of Aqua Teen Hunger Force where they clone their TV and everything goes to hell. Meatwad watches this creepy educational puppet show:


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Slimy Stories / Re: Afterpeople
« on: 11:33:41 PM 09/11/14 »
Oddly enough, perhaps the most unsettling part for me was finding out the narrator was only seven years old.

Which is not to say that the ending wasn't unsettling. "Unsettling" would be an understatement.

Any writer could have thought of having the Afterpeople find her dad's corpse. A lot of writers would also have the idea of Nia eating her dad's corpse. But this line:

"A meat!"

...is what makes the ending so, so disturbing.

It's hard to write genuinely creepy stories when every horror trope and twist ending has been done a million times over. But you find a way to put a an unexpected twist on it, making it horrific again. Great job.

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