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First World

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  • Drifty textual promelgations.
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on: 06:46:01 AM 06/09/16
Re: A Few Suggestions
Excellently executed Creepypasta.
Full of your inimitable dark humor.
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on: 11:28:41 AM 01/21/17
Re: A Few Suggestions
You should put this into a story it is great!
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on: 08:42:47 PM 11/03/17
Re: A Few Suggestions
Uhhhh, you mind if I try and write my own? Like, from the perspective of the person who recovered that suggestion box?
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Ǐ̡́̂ W̭͚̪̬̟͓ͭ͆̓̋ͧAͯ҉S̙̬̜̞̯͕̄ ̢̹̼̼̭͕̜ͮͥ̄ͣ́ͅD͉̹͍͈̹̣̃͛Ǫ̯͕̏̅̅̋̒Ḭ͓̙͚̤̙ͥ̔͌ͯ̐Ń͚̐ͮ̽̆ͤ͂G͖ F̝̙͇̝́͛͘ͅȊ̳͇̮̐̄̌ͫ̉̀N̩̂̂͌ͣ̓ͮͣE̘̲̰̳͚̙ͤ̽͛̋ͬ.̴̭̘̟̳͉ͭ.͉͖̦̔̓̽ͭ̅̄͘.͔͚̞̩̰̼̦ͦ͑́͒̓ͪͧ͘!̣̳͉͉͕̼̲̇̾͠ ̧̜̳ͪ͌̉Ï͖̪͎̩ W̪ͮ̌̍ͣ̊̂̇̕A̓ͣͧ͝S̳̾̀ͣ̾͒̌ͫ ̪̳̫̗̜͔͍ͮ̽Ḡ̥̤̳̥̠͚̦Ĕ̙̱̪͆͆ͫ͌̃̽T̷͗͆̓ͫ̑T̲͖̗͈̭͂̃̓̈̓I͈͍̓͌̿͛͂̇N̠̬̻̦̂̽G̸͓̼͙̰ B̷̻̋ͤ̿̑̉Ȅ͐̃Ț̲͉͍͇ͯ͐T̡̺̄ͦ͌ͯͬ͑̆E̺͎̜ͦ̊ͥ̈́̄̚ͅR͚̥̣͉͓ͤ̌ͦ̋.̙͙͍ͫ̑ͭ̿ͧ̓̒͞.̤̜̺͍͉̼̔.̀ͫ̏̐͡!̵͇̱̳̏̇͗!̘̩̗͐̃̍̏ͭ͘


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on: 04:39:51 PM 12/11/17
Re: A Few Suggestions
I'm actually a little confused by some of the stuff .
"Are my feet sinking into the floor"
"or is it just me?"
Is this Frank speaking? And
"Please help the costume is heavy and there are no hooks left for me"
I don't get it. Like, "I don't get it so I don't know the intended scare" confused.
But other than that this is a pretty creepy story.
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